Grr. Blargh.

[shaych_03]

edit. edit. edit. edit. edit some more. edit. edit. edit. with a side helping of edit.

um. yeah.

pronouns suck.

that is all.

needless to say... that story i wanted to finish before i started the "edit" phase of my life... not finished. *sigh*

hopefully, it won't take too long to get through this, so i can go back to Kate and Elizabeth. they lack but one scene and then i can guess what... yep... EDIT it LOL

Comments

[seftiri.livejournal.com]

Yeah, but since I'm your editor for that story, I can guarantee you I won't be asking you to a) dumb anything down, b) cut anything at all, and c) avoid referencing "fanfiction cliches".

:P

[shaych-03.livejournal.com]

ah well. you know there's parts i could cut ... just as there are bits i could expand on. :)

[seftiri.livejournal.com]

There is not a single section that can be cut from that story. As for expansion, well, there are a few scenes I wouldn't mind seeing more of...

;)

[shaych-03.livejournal.com]

oh there's bits that could be trimmed. and they will be, i'm sure. you'll have to let me know what you want expanded though.